雅思大作文:影响孩子成长的因素

Some people think that the main factors influencing a child’s development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important.

Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

While parents obviously play a major role in the way that their child develops as they get older, many people believe that social factors outside of the family now influence children much more. This essay will examine both sides of the argument.

虽然随着年龄的增长,父母在孩子的成长过程中扮演着重要的角色,但许多人认为家庭之外的社会因素对孩子的影响要大得多。这篇文章将考察这一论点的两面。

There is no doubt that there are factors external to the family that significantly impact on a child’s development. For example, there is television and the internet. Children these days have access to these much more than they used to in the past, and they will pick up language and see things that will teach them about life. Friends also have an important influence as a child will often copy peers that they admire and respect. This could be positive behaviour but it could also be negative, such as smoking or taking drugs.

毫无疑问,家庭之外的一些因素对孩子的发展有显著的影响。例如,有电视和互联网。如今,孩子们接触到这些东西的机会比过去多得多,他们会学习语言,看到能教给他们生活的东西。朋友也有一个重要的影响,因为孩子经常会模仿他们钦佩和尊敬的同龄人。这可能是积极的行为,也可能是消极的,比如吸烟或吸毒。

Ultimately, however, it is family who have the most important impact. Children spend nearly all of their time with their family, especially in their early years. They develop their confidence, socialisation skills, morals, values and views on life through their interaction with them. Proof of the importance of this can be seen in the differences between some children. Those that grow up in a dysfunctional home often eventually have problems themselves, whilst those that are brought up in a warm and close environment end up more confident and secure in adult life.

然而,最终影响最大的还是家庭。孩子们几乎所有的时间都和家人在一起,尤其是在他们很小的时候。通过与他们的互动,他们培养了自信、社交技巧、道德、价值观和人生观。从一些孩子之间的差异可以看出这一点的重要性。那些在功能失调的家庭中长大的孩子最终会有问题,而那些在温暖和亲密的环境中长大的孩子在成年后会更加自信和安全。

To conclude, it is the family that can provide a supportive, secure, and nurturing environment, which is crucial to the way in which a child becomes an adult. Although it is clear that social factors play a part, I would argue that it is the former that is the most important.

综上所述,家庭能够提供一个支持性的、安全的、养育性的环境,这对于孩子成长为成年人至关重要。虽然很明显社会因素起了作用,但我认为前者是最重要的。

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