Describe a public place that you think need improvements
You should say:
What the place is When do you go there
What do you like and dislike in the public place

The public place that I think need improvements is the community library near my home. I often go there after work, probably twice a week.

There are several aspects I like about the library. The first one is the whole atmosphere. Every time I go into the library, I can see people in all ages reading books, surfing in the internet, discussing questions, or watching movies, which makes me feel peaceful. The second one is the variety of books. It not only has Chinese books but also some English books. The third one is the easy access to all the materials. Application to the library card is easy and free. People can borrow 6 books for one time.

However, there are some parts I don’t like about the library. For example, the library doesn’t have a quiet study area. It’s pretty noisy for people or students who want to study lonely and quietly. The library can consider to build a quiet study room in the future.