雅思G类大作文全球真题:时尚穿着的利与弊 2018-02-10: Pakistan; Turkey

2018-02-10: Pakistan; Turkey
More and more people wear fashionable clothes.
Is this development positive or negative.

 

范文1:

It is true that there have been an increasing number of people wearing stylish clothes with a view to pursuing fashion. There are several factors contributing to this trend, which have various negative influences on people’s lives.

The foremost reason for this trend involves individuals’ adequate financial capacity which derives from the thriving economy. With an abundance of money being left over, after covering basic needs such as food, education and medical care, many people choose to equip themselves with better and more fashionable clothes. Another important factor is the urge of many adults to be more attractive and unique than others. This must involve wearing clothes with novel designs, allowing people, especially young adults to vividly display their distinct characteristics.

Despite the high demand for fashionable garments bringing incentives to the economic development of a society, the negative effects of ceaselessly catching up with the newest fashion trend on people’s lives are numerous. One of which is that the considerable amount of money some people spend on luxurious and stylish garments has made them suffer from financial deficits. It is often the case that a person ends up working excessively long hours in order to cover their huge expenses on clothing. In addition, people in pursuit of fashion are easily encouraged to be greedy and materialistic because they may find it difficult to give up the happiness resulting from satisfying their material needs. Simply, People get addicted to instant gratification. This could in turn make these people develop a sense of alienation as they tend to value material items more than meaningful relationships between people, leading to the deterioration of mutual respect in a society.

In conclusion, competent financial ability and the desire to be better and more unique than others are two causes driving people to purchase in vogue clothes. The decreasing level of mutual respect and the rise in the number of people suffering from financial difficulties as a result of the aforementioned trend can cause more drawbacks which counteract the economic benefits it brings.

范文2:

Nowadays, it is becoming a trend for some people to wear latest wardrobes and to show case their innovation and sense. Also, as part of globalization youngsters prefer to new fashion clothes to adapt to the society. However, others believe this trend would have a adverse affect to their traditional clothing. In the following passage, I will explain various factors for this change before declaring whether it is a positive or negative development.

At present, more people are migrating to developed countries to experience better living standard. During such relocation they tend to wear latest fashionable clothes to be one among the society, and to gain confidence in their work locations. In addition, it is also considered as a self-esteem factor for many people to follow latest clothed while attending public and private ceremonies. For instance, my friend went to Canada as part of work location transfer, after 5 years I could see a radical change in his clothing style, and he said this change is needed to socialize with this neighbours, friends and colleagues. But some people suggest this transformation would hamper the native clothing style is various ways. Hence, it is believe wearing latest fashionable clothes is a need to gain confidence and to be part of the local community.

Further more, even country will be benefited because of this trend. This would foster nation’s clothing industry in leaps and bounds, could provide direct and indirect jobs opportunities for many youngsters, and has cascading effect to country’s economy. Therefore, it is assumed this change of wearing latest clothes is good for the nation in all aspects.

To sum up, amidst this change could have negative affect on native clothing style, however, considering country’s financial factor and people’s liveability it is always a positive development.

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