雅思A类大作文全球真题:全社会对个体犯罪难辞其咎? 2018-03-10: TIndia; Saudi Arabia; United Arab Emirates

Some individual do activities which are consider as crime and anti-social, society as a whole should be blamed for their activities.
What are the causes of anti-social activities?
Who are responsible for their Anti-social behavior?

范文1:

The structure of a society plays an instrumental role in the development of its citizens. People carry out anti-social activities if the society is unequal and if it fails at imparting morals among people. Since the unequal distribution of resources is primarily due to political reasons, politicians are responsible for crimes in a society.

An unequal society cannot fulfill the aspirations of its youngsters through legitimate channels. Many youngsters, after failing to achieve an adequate education and a respectable job, indulge in anti-social activities such as theft and extortion. For example, since the Indian economic reforms of 1991, the wealth has been concentrated in the hands of the richest citizens and this has increased the incidents of money-related crimes. Moreover, some societies fail in imparting proper moral education to their youngsters due to external factors such as poverty, war or famine. In such cases, youngsters learn to focus on their survival than on ethics and morals. Consequently, society should be blamed for anti-social activities.

Since politicians have a job to make a society more equal and prevent wars and famines, they should be blamed for most illegal activities. They often fail in carrying out their duty to uplift all sections of society and to ensure that no one is left behind. They often collude with businessmen and bureaucrats to create crony capitalism that benefits a few sections of society only. This leads to concentration of wealth in a few hands.

In conclusion, a society will be more healthy and people will abstain from anti-social activities if it is equitable and gives equal opportunities to everyone. The onus of this change falls on the shoulders of politicians.

范文2:

It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of life there is also a growth in the anti-social behaviour. People commit crimes and have become less respectful of each other. In the following paragraphs, I shall analyze some causes of this phenomenon and suggest some ways forward.

Today we live in an era of technology in which the whole Earth has shrunk and become a global village. Everybody is connected to everybody through telephone lines and the internet but the warmth of relationships has taken a back seat. Most people have more than enough wealth, comfort and freedom but their hearts desire even more. To satisfy their hearts greed people choose unethical means such as committing petty and serious crimes. People have become selfish, isolated and indifferent and do not think twice before doing anything wrong. Each person is busy in his own quest for more.

The changing family structure is another big cause of this phenomenon. Earlier, people lived in joint families and the grandparents were there to supervise the children. Now there are nuclear families in which both parents go out to work and children are left unattended in the hands of pervasive media like the TV and the internet. No one monitors what they watch and they see the programs full of violence and crime which makes them anti social. The pressure of consumerist society and peers also breeds anti social behaviour. Finally, unemployment is a cause of this phenomenon. The youth have a lot of energy and if it is not harnessed in the right direction can make them go astray and commit crimes. Therefore, it is essential that they don’t suffer from the menace of unemployment.

The individuals themselves, the society and the governments should deal with this situation together. There are many solutions to this problem. To begin with, people have to learn to strike a balance between work and family life. Government should also fix the maximum hours a worker can work per week so that exploitation is not there in the job market. People should revert back to the old joint family system. This would be in the benefit of all. The children would learn moral values and the elderly would be well looked after. Negative effects of excessive consumerism should be taught to the people. More and more employment opportunities should be created for the unemployed youth. Self employment can also be encourages.

To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, anti social behaviour and mutual lack of respect in today’s times can be dealt with by taking simple measures and individuals and governments should collectively take these steps.

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