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雅思大作文问题类型:Advantages and disadvantages essay

雅思写作大作文 advantages & disadvantages是常见问题之一,对于这类问题,你的文章需要从正反两个方面作出陈述,并给出你自己的观点和意见。

写作实例

A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income.

Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.

Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world.

Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

这是一篇关于旅游的文章,观点内容相当广泛,对于advantages & disadvantages essay 类型问题,写作思路可参照如下:

Advantages of tourism:

  • boost in country’s economy due to increased spending
  • new job opening for local people
  • opportunities to discover new places for individual travelers

Disadvantages of tourism:

  • destruction of popular tourist destinations by large numbers of tourists
  • development of illegal economic activities
  • local people can experience loss of privacy

 

写作结构

  1. Introduction
  2. Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  3. Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  4. Conclusion

 

1.Introduction

  • Write the introduction in 2 sentences:
  • Sentence 1 – paraphrase the question (restate the problem):
  • Nowadays tourism generates a significant portion of national income for many countries, but it has certain drawbacks too.
  • Sentence 2 – tell the examiner what you’re going to describe in your essay:
  • This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.

2.Body paragraph 1 – advantages

  • Sentence 1 – state 2 main advantages:
  • The two main advantages of developed tourism industry are boost in country’s economy and a large number of new job openings for the local people.
  • Sentences 2-4 – explain the first advantage + give an example (if possible):
  • Firstly, tourists spend money on a wide range of services, including hotels, amusements, transportation, food and
  • medical services. This way, tourism yields an additional income, greatly supporting the countries’ economies.
  • Sentences 5-7 – explain the second advantage + give an example (if possible):
  • Secondly, tourism increases the level of employment by bringing new jobs. For instance, the influx of tourists
  • results in a larger demand in restaurant workers, tour guides, hotel staff and employees of retail services, exhorting business owners to hire more people for these positions.

3.Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages

  • Sentence 1 – state 2 main disadvantages:
  • However, tourism also has some major disadvantages like destruction of popular tourist destinations and development of illegal economic activities.
  • Sentences 2-4 – explain the first disadvantage + give an example (if possible):
  • Ancient buildings, temples and monuments struggle to cope with a vast amount of visitor’s traffic and get
  • damaged. Also, the large number of tourists can cause environmental problems. For instance, when places of interest are overcrowded, natural resources often become overexploited.
  • Sentences 5-7 – explain the second disadvantage + give an example (if possible):
  • What’s more, tourism can create more serious situations where criminal issues are involved. The presence of a
  • considerable number of tourists with a lot of money to spend, and often carrying valuables such as cameras and jewelry, increases the attraction for criminals and brings with it activities like
  • robbery and drug dealing.
  • Sentences 8 – make an accent on your opinion (we’ll use the opinion that tourism has more advantages):
  • However, proper hospitality management and correct usage of tourism revenue by
  • the local government can eliminate these disadvantages.

4.Conclusion

  • Sentences 1-2 – briefly restate the advantages and disadvantages:
  • To conclude, although tourism has certain disadvantages like destructive effects and growth of crime rate, it has an extremely positive impact on country’s economy and provides a large number of new jobs for the local people.
  • Sentence 2 – give your final opinion:
  • I believe that these benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks.

 

写作范文

Nowadays tourism generates a significant portion of national income for many countries, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion.

现在许多国家的国民收入中有很大一部分来自旅游业,但旅游业也有一些弊端。本文将探讨旅游业的利与弊,并给出一个合乎逻辑的结论。

The two main advantages of developed tourism industry are boost in country’s economy and a large number of new job openings for the local people. Firstly, tourists spend money on a wide range of services, including hotels, amusements, transportation, food and medical services. This way, tourism yields an additional income, greatly supporting the country’s economy. Secondly, tourism increases the level of employment by bringing new jobs. For instance, the influx of tourists results in a larger demand in restaurant workers, tour guides, hotel staff and employees of retail services, exhorting business owners to hire more people for these positions.

发达的旅游业的两个主要优势是促进国家经济和大量新的就业机会为当地人民。首先,游客在各种各样的服务上花钱,包括酒店、娱乐、交通、食物和医疗服务。通过这种方式,旅游业可以产生额外的收入,极大地支持国家的经济。其次,旅游业通过创造新的就业机会来提高就业水平。例如,游客的涌入导致餐馆员工、导游、酒店员工和零售服务员工的需求增加,这促使企业主为这些职位雇佣更多的人。

But tourism also has some major disadvantages like destruction of popular tourist destinations and development of illegal economic activities. іAncient buildings, temples and monuments struggle to cope with a vast amount of visitor’s traffic and get damaged. Also, the large number of tourists can cause environmental problems. For instance, when places of interest are overcrowded, natural resources often become overexploited. What’s more, the presence of a considerable number of tourists with a lot of money to spend, and often carrying valuables such as cameras and jewelry, increases the attraction for criminals and brings with it activities like robbery and drug dealing. However, proper hospitality management and correct usage of tourism revenue by the local government can eliminate these disadvantages.

但旅游业也有一些主要的缺点,如破坏热门旅游目的地和发展非法经济活动。іAncient建筑,寺庙和纪念碑难以应付大量的游客的流量和受损。此外,大量的游客会造成环境问题。例如,当旅游景点过于拥挤时,自然资源往往被过度开发。更重要的是,大量的游客,有很多钱花,经常携带贵重物品,如相机和珠宝,增加了吸引力的罪犯和它带来的活动,如抢劫和毒品交易。然而,适当的酒店管理和当地政府对旅游收入的正确使用可以消除这些缺点。

To conclude, although tourism can have certain negative effects like destructive impact and growth of crime rate, it has an extremely positive influence on country’s economy and provides a large number of new jobs for the local people. I believe that these benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks.

综上所述,尽管旅游业会产生一定的负面影响,如破坏性影响和犯罪率的增长,但它对国家的经济有着极其积极的影响,为当地人提供了大量的新工作。我相信旅游业的这些好处超过它的缺点。

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