Describe a person who encouraged and helped you to achieve a goal You should say
Who this person is
What this person encouraged you to do
How this person helped you
Explain why this encouragement helped you to achieve the goal
And explain how you felt about it

My friend Andrew is a very good friend to me, and last summer he was there for me in my time of need (在我需要帮助的时候）.Andrew encouraged me and helped me achieve agoal when I thought I did not have the power to do it.

Last summer, my friends and I had all decided to visit Macau. Andrew is a big fan of extreme sports (极限运云力）so he took me to the Tower of Macau which is a famous site for bungee jumping. He advised me to have a try. Then I thought for a while and consider that we got to do something crazy when we were young, so I made up my mind to go bungee jumping with him.

However, just right before I was about to jump I started to panic (害怕）.I wanted to cancel the entire thing but Andrew came to my aid and gave me encouragement. He explained that he was also terrified, but it was very safe to do this. He advised me to close my eyes before jumping and in the end everything was going to be alright. We were about to do something amazing which we would never forget. His words calmed me down and I was able to do the bungee jump.

I felt very grateful for Andrew^ help. I was really scared of doing the bungee jump and I do not think I would have been able to do it without him. Often all one needs are words of encouragement from a close friend and then they can achieve anything.

中文思路：

安德鲁是我的好朋友，去年夏天当我需要帮助的时候，他就在我身边。当我认为自己没 有能力做到的时候，他鼓励我实现了目标。

去年夏天，我和朋友们决定去澳门旅游。安德鲁非常喜欢极限运动所以他带我去了澳门 塔，那是一个著名的蹦极场所。他劝我去试一试。然后我想了一会儿，考虑到我们年轻 的时候应该做一些疯狂的事情，所以我诀定和他一起去蹦极。

然而，就在我要跳下去之前，我开始恐慌。我想取消这个计划，但安德鲁给了我鼓励。 他解释说他也很害怕，但是这样做很安全。他建议我跳之前可以闭上眼睛，最后一切都 会没事的。我们要做一些我们永远不会忘记的事情^他的话使我平静下来，我能蹦极了。

我非常感谢安德鲁的帮助。我真的很害怕做蹦极，我想如果没有他，我不可能做到。通常，一个人所需要的只是来自亲密朋友的鼓励之词，然后他们就能成就任何事。